Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Final Project - Gaia Gum Sketches


The single-pack of gum & strips will be made of a light wood, a thin rectangular piece close to a normal gum pack shape that will be able to snugly house and be able to slip out & replace each sheet of gum or strips. The gum will be held in an egg carton material with holes for the pieces to comfortably sit in without moving around. At the end will be a solid wood block in which you grab to slip out & enjoy the gum or slip out and slip a new one in, to which the old empty one can be tossed and will quickly degrade. Around the majority of this wood structure will be a compostable fabric/paper that has a nice texture/feel in your hands so it's pleasing to the touch but still good for the environment. Around the edge of where the wood slip-block will be a hemp rope wrapped & tied around the structure with a tag on the end of it, with the logo & information about the product. The refill packs will be just slightly larger, but a little more than thrice the thickness, for each will open up on the side ( easy access ) to reveal 3 seperate refill packs that you can just slip right into the single-pack container. The box that the refill slips come in will be mostly compostable paper, doubled up for strength, with a dominating illustration of a wise owl on the front, simple and more geometric for the gum and more flowery and ornate for the strips.

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Project 2 Comps

Here are the comp(s) for the box that the bottle will come in. The bottle itself will just have the delicate 'C' letter on the front, in black, with no other type or imagery.

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

5 Examples of Good & Bad Package Design

                                                                             Good:

These salt & pepper shakers are cleverly masked as batteries - They're effective for a few reasons, one being that the 'energy level' is the indicator of how much is left in each. The clean, mechanical look and the modern type treatment not only makes the product look sleek, but effective in its funcionality.

This Gin bottle packaging utilizes a minimal swiss style design, with a sophisticated, illustrated look. The ornate logo gives it a feeling of lavishness without looking too pricey.

This wine botle package utilizes a stark contrast to draw the eye to the brand name, as if said by an outside source ( maybe the bottle itself? ).  It looks sleek, futuristic, sexy, and grabs the attention.

These assortments of over-the-counter medicines have been put into a much more casual catagory, rather than appearing cold and clinical. They address the feeling of the symptom more than the medical aspect, and are nicely color-coded. The humor works well with this product, it makes people give a second glance.

These seed/seedling packages are not only recyclable, but biodegradable. They utilize the look of organic materials, and it's actually okay for the environment. They all have a nice, delicate, dainty look but they're also not too light as to portray too much fanciness.

Bad:

For such a small package, the amount of examples they show on the front is ridiculous, superfluous tiny images that don't really convince the buyer of anything. The headline at least stands out, but the blue and brown together don't make for an appealing or even appetizing product.

While not being completely horrible, this container of sea salt has a lot of issues with it's contrast of imagery and type. A lot of the information is too dark to easily read against the background. There also seems to be a square with an image of salt water... in front of an image of salt water. 

The only good thing about this is that the headline is the biggest thing on there. There is far too much type going on here, so after one reads 'honey' the eye doesn't know where to go next. The thin red information text doesn't go well with the bright yellow background either - for readability it's a failure.

There are a few issues i have with this Laxative packaging. First, there's an image of an orange on the bottom left corner for some reason. Second, the gradient makes some of the dark informational text get lost. Lastly, there is an uncomfortable negative space below the main paragraph of type.

I don't even know where to start with this one. There's no indication of where to look first and where to go from there - it looks like someone took a bunch of type and threw it down without any concept of heirarchy or negative space.  It's a mad cluster of information, most of which does not need to be included on the front of the package, or on the package at all.

Monday, August 29, 2011

About Me & Work Examples

Hi my name's Ryan Thomas and I'm a Graphic Design major. I am a transfer student in my 2nd semester at CSUN, having spent 2 1/2 years at Moorpark College & a semester at the Academy of Art in San Francisco prior to coming to Northridge. Beside visually designing I enjoy going to events of musical inclination, playing drums, and eating tasty stuff.

Some Examples of my work: